Cosmic Monopole Free on Saturday 21 Jan 2012

The Cosmic Monopole will be free on Amazonon Saturday 21 Jan 2012. It is part of the Kindle Direct Publishing programme, so members of Amazon Prime who own a Kindle can borrow books free once a month and the author gets commission. But on Saturday anyone can buy The Cosmic Monopole for Kindle free!

History of the Universe eBook

I am spending most of my time at the moment writing an eBook version of the History of the Universe, re-writing most of the material and producing new images. Once the work is finished I plan to port it back into the hotu site, then go back to working on volume 2 of Time Crystal.

Cosmic Monopole Available on Amazon

The new version of first volume of Time Crystal is now called The Cosmic Monopole. It is available in Kindle format from

 

Sample on Scribd

I have taken a break from writing my History of the Universe eBook and started to market the Cosmic Monopole, which has been disgracefully neglected since it was put on Amazon and Smashwords.

Marketing and selling is so much less interesting (or at least so it seems to me) than writing, but it is utterly necessary, otherwise nobody will ever read what I have taken so much time and trouble to write.

My first step in the long road of finding readers (and eventually customers) was to upload some sample pages to Scribd:

http://www.scribd.com/doc/76072853/Cosmic-Mono-Pole-Sample

There you can read the pdf or download it. Okay, so it’s not a big step but at least I’ve started the journey. The hard part is to force myself to do a bit every day. I guess I should be spending an hour a day on marketing. Well  perhaps I will find the determination to do it.

Hotu eBook

I’m busy converting the History of the Universe website into an eBook. This will perhaps allow me to make a little more money and so give me more time to write Time Crystal.

In addition the process of writing is forcing me to review the whole website, and eventually to re-write it.

Time Crystal News 26 June 2011

Podcasting

I have finally decided I need to podcast the new version of Time Crystal, the third edition. Podcasts are the medium readers like best. Nobody has time or patience to read these days but anyone can listen to a podcast while they drive to work or do the shopping.

I remind myself of the comments by listeners to the podcasts of the earlier version and realise that I made a number of errors. They hated the way I tried to characterise the voices. They hated the sound effects I added for aliens’ voices. They hated the music. Although they did seem to like my voice.

But I would prefer to use speech synthesis software to generate the new podcasts if possible, since it would save me a huge amount of time recording and even more editing the recording. In addition, by using speech synthesis I can quickly edit and listen again in an interactive editorial mode, something far more difficult if you are recording your own voice. So podcasting using speech synthesis can, I believe, greatly enhances the quality of the text.

Yet I am not sure whether listeners would accept a computer generated podcast. I believe the quality of the TextAloud voices I use is high, but is it high enough to allow listeners to listen for half an hour at a time, week after week?

So, as an experiment, I have produced a sample podcast of Episode 1. The fact that I knew people were going to listen to it seemed to focus my mind on the text. While preparing the podcast by listening to the spoken words, I not only corrected mispronunciations (within TextAloud) but I also heard faults with the text itself and with its rhythm, faults which I had simply not noticed before.

I rephrased many sections, sometimes adding whole paragraphs. For example the idea of directly addressing the Cosmic Monopole instead of (as hitherto) referring to it in the third person, was completely new and came naturally as I listened.

I even realised something fundamental about the scenario described in the Sacred Book which I had never thought of before, something which will almost certainly change the whole course of the story later on.

Once more I am forcibly struck by the necessity of listening to text spoken, and for me listening to a computerised voice is better than listening to myself, for if a computer can make the text sound interesting then it must have intrinsic quality.

Now I need YOUR feedback, gentle reader. Please listen to the podcast and tell me what you think. It lasts 27 minutes, but you don’t have to listen to it all if you don’t have the time. Five minutes will suffice to tell you if you like or loath the voice.

You can find it here and either download or listen on line.

If that link does not work try http://timecrystal.co.uk/audio/TC_01.mp3

So please, dear gentle reader, the next time you need to do something boring such as building a garden shed or waiting for the kettle to boil, please just spend a few minutes listening to this podcast and let me know whether you find the voices are acceptable.

Please write to me know at wyken@timecrystal.co.uk

And of course, as always, I would also love to know what you think about the story.

Finally you can download the TextAloud speech synthesis system yourself if you would like to try it out. It is useful for proof-reading letters or reading web pages, and it’s free. Just click

http://www.nextup.com/download.html

Note that the voices I use cost a bit extra but they are worth it. They are all AT&T voices, and you get two of them included when you buy the optional upgrade. My advice is to try the free version first and see if you find it useful.

Technical Stuff

If you happen to be interested in writing or podcasting then you might want to know a bit about the technical aspects of producing this podcast. One aim of this newsletter is not just to describe the art of writing but to describe the mechanics.

If the response from your feedback is positive then I will need to set about creating a new Podiobooks publication, repeating this process for all 52 episodes of Part 1.

I believe that podcasting is a part of the author’s toolkit, but it takes a huge amount of time. I podcast via Podiobooks which has several benefits:

  • Access to larger audiences
  • Feedback from listeners
  • Automatic feed into iTunes

However there are disadvantages. Evo Terra who runs Podiobooks has stringent standard for the format he requires. Therefore one of my worries when producing this podcast via TextAloud was whether it was able to produce the format which Evo wants, namely an MP3 file with the following properties:

  • Bit Rate: 128 kbps
  • Rate: 44.1 kHz
  • Stereo Mode/Channel: Joint Stereo

Luckily TextAloud 3 is able to produce files with exactly these features, making the production process a dream compared to the nightmare of recording and editing which used to take me days.

Production Method

The method of production is as follows.

I write the text in a single Word document. Modern versions of Word are easily able to handle a 170,000 word file (in sharp contrast to earlier versions).

For the purposes of this trial I embedded TextAloud commands directly into the document and formatted them as Heading 3. I have a Word macro which will hide these when I need to publish the text and I could write a new one to delete all text of this kind if required.

I then listened to TextAloud reading the text. This required adding pronunciations to the dictionary and editing the text itself as outline above.

Having got the text in a good state I used a Word macro to select a complete Episode which I then copied into TextAloud and added header and footer commands which will speak the intro and the outro.

The voices I used were the AT&T Crystal and Mike. I have bought several other voices in the past but I find these are easier to understand than some of the others.

I also ensured that TextAloud would add the MP3 tags which Evo wants as far as possible. I exported the file and used a program called Mp3tag to tweak the tags. Once the procedure is set up it’s relatively quick.

News for Time Crystal 18 June 2011

News

So it’s June 2011 already and I’m still ploughing through the first 52 Episodes of Part 1 (a unification of volumes 1 and 2), checking that the new unified story is coherent and that the new layer of the story (the Sacred Book) is used appropriately.

I’m also putting together a query letter to send to agents and a synopsis to send to publishers. I think that if I can get a publisher interested in this story I will be able to focus on the writing instead of being distracted by also trying to publish and sell it.

As well as all that, I have recently revised my understanding of what time crystals look like.

Visualising Crystal

When you look into a time crystal you can see one of three things.

If you are not holding the crystal at the right distance from your eye or at the right angle then you simply see the inside of the crystal. But it’s always been hard for me to imagine exactly what fragments of crystal look like so I adopted the author’s perogative of just making up a general descriptoin and largely ignoring the details. Until recently I thought that crystals were filled with brown swirling clouds.

My ideas have now changed, in part because I have recently bought several quartz crystals of different shapes, and I now believe that if you are not holding them in a special way, time crystals look clear, although still glowing faintly blue, a bit like this…

Now that I have a real crystal (albeit made of simple quartz instead of complex crysorganic material as time crystals are) I am in a much better position to describe what they look like. For example I didn’t realise before that the phenomenon called “total internal reflection” would be so dominant for a tetrahedron, which is the shape of almost all time crystals to start with.

Of course most authors would probably say “Don’t worry about the real world. Just invent the facts to suit yourself.” But I feel obliged to be as true to the real world as possible. This story is, after all, trying to tell the history of the Universe as accurately as possible, given the fact that it’s fiction with characters moving through history and interacting with the things they find there. I think the time and effort I take in researching the real world is paid back many
times over by the things I discover.

If you hold a time crystal close to your eye and look into a flat face you see something more interesting. Each blue time crystal is connected to others by something called a “negative energy string”. In fact there are many of these strings, forming a bundle, but each one is extremely narrow so the bundle is still very thin indeed. This bundle enters the crystal through one face and emerges from a different face. Crystals are strung out along this bundle of strings,
like pearls on a
necklace. If you happen to be looking into one of these two special faces, and if the bundle of strings passes into your pupil, then you can see along the string and out of the face of another crystal. That other crystal can either be the next crystal in the necklace or it might even be a pipe in the event network outside the Universe.

And finally you see something different if you hold the crystal away from your eye and let the light shine through it. In this case you can see objects revealed in the environment around you which would otherwise be invisible. For a while I thought this would be quite easy with real crystal, but my crystal has shown me it is actually quite difficult to see through a tetrahedon.

So these crystals have now given me a much clearer idea of what real crystals look and feel like. This will make my description of time crystals more vivid and authentic.

Thanks for reading

Thanks for subscribing to the Time Crystal Newsletter.

Best wishes,

Wyken Seagrave
wyken@timecrystal.co.uk


News for Time Crystal 15 Apr 2011

News

It’s been a long time since I’ve had time to put a newsletter together, a fact which has been a source of concern to me, but sometimes life gets in the way of good intentions and in any case I have not been idle. Over the past few months I have merged volumes 1 and 2 into a single new volume of around 170 thousand words and worked through most of it bringing it into line with the major change which began during my last visit to Geneva, namely, that the Sacred Book (dictated with Divine Wisdom by His Holiness the Son of Beeing) is now an integral part of the story.

Sacred Book

The Sacred Book is serves several purposes:

  • By opening Time Crystal it sets the tone for the whole story, making it clear that this is a work of science fiction and not a child’s story, as some readers complained about with earlier editions.
  • It allows me as the author to insert a scientific commentary on any actions I want, in a way which seems to the reader natural and integral with the plot. I am not aware of any other book which has such an elegant solution to this technical problem.
  • It provides an intriguing parallel story to the main plot, written in a distinctive voice, whose origin at first is not explained.

Sample Chapters

To read the latest versions of the first three chapters (including some Sacred Book extracts) please follow on these links:

http://timecrystal.co.uk/pdf/part1/Episode1-1.pdf
http://timecrystal.co.uk/pdf/part1/Episode1-2.pdf
http://timecrystal.co.uk/pdf/part1/Episode1-3.pdf

As always I’d really like to know what you think, although I very seldom get any response from readers of this Newsletter, which must tell me something but I’m not sure what. Anyway your feedback will be gratefully received. Please write to me at wyken@timecrystal.co.uk

Mobile Editing

For Christmas I bought myself a Blackberry (at my age people very rarely buys me anything –not that I’m complaining, I seldom buy anything for any else either) and now I am reaping the benefits. During the past week, when the weather was glorious, I was able to go for long walks in the countryside (my favourite–indeed my only–form of exercise) and at the same time edit THE ACTUAL TEXT of Time Crystal. I was so delighted with this that I thought I would explain how it’s done.

  1. I use Microsoft Word to write Time Crystal. On my PC I can easily edit 170,000 word documents.
  2. I have written a macro which divides the work in separate Word files, each containing one Episodel
  3. I use “Documents to Go” for Blackberry to copy these to my Blackberry.
  4. I also use the TextAloud speech synthesiser in batch mode to convert these files into audio which I also copy to the Blackberry.
  5. When walking I use the free Mobiola xPlayer to play the audio. This will play through the Jabra Bluetooth headset I use and its battery will last for hours.
  6. When I find something I want to change I simply stop the player, open the text and edit right there.
  7. In fact I have a second stage of checking when I get back to my office, copying the edits into the main document, because often (as in fact today) I have simply asked questions or made comments which require a lot more work.

I think this is so much better than my old way of working, which was to listen to MP3 recordings and write notes on paper. I am delighted with this. In a three hour walk I proofed five chapters.

Opening Episodes December 2010

I’ve been very busy re-writing Time Crystal’s opening Episodes. Feedback from readers is very positive, but I am always looking for more.

Click on the Episodes below to read or download, and please comment below or write to me at wyken@timecrystal.co.uk to let me know what you think.

The image above is the latest cover created by Yvette Bessels. Thanks very much Yvette!

Feedback from Scribophile

The response to the second edition of Volume One was mixed, some people hating the opening, some liking it, but very few loving it.

So when I returned from my trip to Geneva I began the task of revising the opening few chapters. The resulting version of Chapter 1 was posted on Scribophile yesterday. I am overwhelmed and stunned to have already received two extremely positive reviews:

Lovely start of a story. Look forward to the next chapter.

yosh.

Beautiful. I absolutely, positively want to read more if you post it. I’m excited for the story, and your writing is beautiful with very few errors.

R.J.Keith

This is so encouraging and I am deeply grateful to these kind people for their time and encouragement.

You can see the latest set of comments, and perhaps comment yourself, at

http://www.scribophile.com/authors/wyken-seagrave/works/time-crystal-new-opening/#comment57786

I will be revising the subsequent few chapters of Volume One over the next few weeks, then hopefully I can return to writing Volume Three, which is a work in progress.